Yeah, you'll have to bump this down to PL8. The extra points are fine. Minimum 120, maximum 180.
A fine idea.
You noted Olylpic level gymnast, so I buy the physical stats. But her thrillseeking ways and her Wisdom seem at odds. Unless it's all a calculated act?
Nothing wrong with being a Spider-Man and having all these powersMcGuffin wrote: ↑Wed Jan 15, 2020 8:57 pmPowers (58):
Nimble: Enhanced Dexterity 8, Enhanced Attack 2, Enhanced Defense 2 [16]
Resilient and Strong: Enhanced Strength 8, Enhanced Constitution 6, Super-Strength 1 [24]
Spider Movement: Leaping 2, Super-Movement 3 (Swinging, Wall-crawling 2) [8]
Spider Senses: Super-Senses 6 (Danger Sense, Darkvision, Tremorsense) [6]
I do think an Olympic level gymnast needs a higher Acrobatics and/or Climb and/or Swim. 5 ranks is Professional when it comes to skill.
I'm assuming the missing number on Attack Specialization is 3? Makes it add up. See below.
You have two enhanced Defense, Dodge Focus 2, and seeing as your Defense is 8, I'm assuming base Defense 4? Which equals up to 8, not 2.
Edit: Ignore this! Caught my mistake.
So, 2 fort, 0 reflex, and 6 will. Do you want her to be that uniform? Spider types are usually big on the reflex. Also, "low" wisdom high will, is she a stubborn sort?
So, where did she get her powers from? How's the relations with the family as of now? What got her thrown in with the worst of the worst?McGuffin wrote: ↑Wed Jan 15, 2020 8:57 pmAbilities 30 + Powers 58 + Skills 6 + Feats 15 + Combat 8 + Saves 3 = 120
Complication: Motivation (Thrills)
Relationships (father Carl Van Lunen, brother Jacob Van Lunen)
Carolien Van Lunen is an Olympic level gymnast from a South African family with a tradition of service in armed forces. The Van Lunen family has served in various military outfits from the Navy to mercenary companies, from cavalry to guerrilla fighters. Her father, a notorious mercenary who has fought in many conflicts on the African continent, raised Carolien and her brother Jacob in a strict military fashion, drilling them from a young age in skills like survival and hand-to-hand combat. Carolien excelled at all things physical, having been blessed with a natural grace to her movements that made her particularly deadly.
Still, she didn’t take to her father’s no-nonsense attitude and strict military discipline, nor was she motivated by greed like Jacob. No, Carolien was in it for the thrills, the adrenaline rush that came from putting her life in danger and risking it all against increasingly dangerous opponents. She was an independent soul, who owed no allegiances to anyone except for herself.
Carolien has a playful personality which more serious mindsets might find difficult to work with. Still, although she has no trouble goofing off, making jokes or flirting with colleagues, she has shown herself to be every bit the born soldier her heritage would indicate her to be.